Unit 4: Time to Move - Email Formal - Writing 7A Lesson
📚 Exercise Contents
📖 Reading and Discussion
This question requires group discussion where each student expresses which programs they prefer to participate in and their reasons. Reasons may include: skill development, learning about new cultures, or improving English proficiency.
🧠 Comprehension and Analysis
🎯 First Query
Question: Will I be allowed to take part (because I'm 15)?
Predicted Answer: Yes, an exception will be made.
⏰ Second Query
Question: What time does the expedition end on July 8?
Predicted Answer: It ends at 12 p.m.
🍽️ Third Query
Question: Are vegetarian meals available?
Predicted Answer: Yes, there are.
💰 Fourth Query
Question: More info about fundraising?
Predicted Answer: Not necessary; info is on the website.
✍️ Writing and Expression
Answers: subject, greeting, opening, being polite, signal topics, being relevant, Have a few queries, Therefore, Could you let me know, I would greatly appreciate it if, With regard to / As for (any order), I am really looking forward to, Best regards
Formal version of Sami's email:
Dear Mr Ross,
I hope this email finds you well. I am considering doing something different this summer, and I would like to enquire about your adventure holiday options, specifically the 'Mountain Biking from Coast to Coast' and 'Survival'.
Subject: Enquiry About Summer Adventure Holiday Options
Dear Mr. Ross,
I hope this message finds you well. I am planning to try something new this summer and would like to enquire about your adventure holiday options, specifically the “Mountain Biking from Coast to Coast” and “Survival Skills on the Isle of Skye” experiences. I would be grateful if you could provide further details to help me decide between the two.
Regarding the mountain biking trip, I enjoy cycling; however, I am slightly concerned about my fitness level. Could you please inform me of the average distance participants are expected to cover each day, and whether the route involves many steep inclines?
With regard to the survival skills experience, I would also like to know how many participants are typically placed in each group.
Finally, as I am passionate about music, I would appreciate it if you could let me know whether it would be possible to bring and play my trumpet during the trip.
I would be grateful if you could respond at your earliest convenience, as I hope to finalise my holiday plans soon.
Thank you very much for your time and assistance. I look forward to hearing from you.
📚 Additional Information
💡 Tips for Formal Email Writing:
Use professional and respectful language, avoid abbreviations and slang words, and review the message to ensure it is free of spelling and grammatical errors.
Make sure the message is clear, concise, and focused on its main purpose.
⬆️ Back to Top💡 Reading Comprehension Skills:
Comprehension skills depend on careful reading, text analysis, and extracting main ideas and important details.
Forming mental questions while reading helps improve understanding and comprehension.
⬆️ Back to Top🔗 Reliable Sources and References
🌐 Reliable Educational Sources:
https://www.moe.gov.jo - Curricula and Study Plans
https://www.britishcouncil.org/english - Free Resources
https://www.eltngl.com - Diverse Educational Materials